Dude, psychicpebble has it spot on it seems. This was awful. In fact, I found myself laughing more than I did crying. Which, come to think of it, I did none of.
I laughed when he jumped off the cliff. That's how this "game" came off as. I think this would have worked better as a movie, with actual animation. In fact, I think the only reason it is a game in the first place is for you to slack off. Look, if you want it to be effective and of quality, put lots of effort into it. It doesn't matter how long it takes, as long as it stays relevant, but it doesn't seem like yours would lost relevance ever.
But besides, it is a pretty cliché idea that isn't really creative. Way overdone. If you were to make something more original, with more thought. "Playing" this isn't even worth the 5 points I get for making it through the damn thing.
"ATTENTION: The story of this game was invented, is not based on a true story!"
Oh really? I don't even think this needs to be said, cause I'm sure it happens in real life all of the time. And even if it was "invented", very little was put into it, so I doubt people would mistake it as such.
So other than giving me some unintentional laughs, this did nothing for me. Literally, nothing. But, it IS content, so that's going for you, but that's it. 1/10, 0/5.
I'm not trying to sound mean, but really think over everything people are saying.
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